Before:

 

Sue called Ponds 4 Real wanting a waterfall, pond and aquatic plant life to bring the lovely sound and natural landscape to her yard.  As you can see their is a crack in the retaining wall which is going to be fixed before the water garden work begins but we should be starting on the project soon.

" I am so glad I saw your ad in the Waco Today Newsmagazine."    Sue

After:

Ask Sue how things are going.

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